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[lumberlady]

truthfully
i am much sad
and lonely
but
will saying so make not so?
this time unsure

so i think i will try to read
but then hero 's lover is TURGID
and now he is

[photo says......... "twitching spasmodically"]

[takeroot]

No, it won't. But it can be worse to let it fester.

[he learned this like two months ago... sage advice.]

That phrase is meant to evoke something similar to, hmm... Have you ever seen a fish out of water? Like that.

I confess not all of the prose is especially good in these books.

[lumberlady]

i will not become so surely
have too many work to do
and plant to care for

[connie the vet…]

fish outside water?
is strange to compare
but manhood does sometimes do this
is not good to say?

[takeroot]

I don't think most of us can help it, sometimes.

[manhood does this...... sad but true.]

Do you think a fish out of water is particularly enticing? There are better images to evoke in this context, I should think.

[lumberlady]

but plant care is most important part
is his mother
so even if he is gone i can not neglect

[wait what]

well
no
but they did not say fish direct...
now i thinking about fish...
what word is more good?
throb?

[takeroot]

A plant is his mother?

Throb would be better than anything happening "spasmodically," yes. It's much subtler.

[lumberlady]

yes
no?
sort of
mother turn into linden tree
by gods
he ask me to grow linden tree with green stone power
and he love
so i cannot be too sad
must care for tree

[it makes sense... right...]

maybe i no try hard to remember this character
is three full
so many strokes

[bc to her it says 散発的...]

[takeroot]

Caring for a tree and being sad are not mutually exclusive items. I feel I should point that out. I have cared for my plants and separately been sad plenty of times.

Just imagine it says "throb," instead.

[lumberlady]

i have confidence for both
but
just can not become so sad that cannot care for tree
is good thing, yes?

[goals... just don't get That Sad...]

throb is only one character
much more easy yes

[takeroot]

Well, it is a tree. Trees do look after themselves quite well in the forest, so I daresay you could afford to worry less about it.

Are there any other words you'd like me to help with?

[lumberlady]

is tree grown by manna and not nature
i do not know
so i give manna every day to keep healthy just in case.

but
no is fine
i think next chapter looks more easy
thank you CONSTANTIN

[takeroot]

Well, do your best, I suppose. Let me know if you'd like to talk about the books again.

1/2

[lumberlady]

i do
thank you one more time CONSTANTIN

Eve of The Next Day...

[lumberlady]

CONSTANTIN
why you no warn i
JULIUS die in such tragic way!!!

[takeroot]

Well, that

would ruin the story? If I tell you what's coming, there won't be any reason to read it!

[lumberlady]

but i ‘s hearts is not prepared!
he no come back alive?
no magic found in enemy ‘s secret base?
not trick?

[takeroot]

I am not going to tell you how the story ends! You must read on!

[lumberlady]

minimum please tell i
will this book answer question of SQUIRE ‘s loyalty
and hero ‘s parentage?
or is this next book?

[takeroot]

One of those is in the next book but I will not be telling you which or, again, it would spoil the entire experience.

[lumberlady]

[hhnnngh that feeling when you have never read novels before and are therefore unfamiliar with the concept of “no spoilers”]

then i read more fast!!

[takeroot]

Please do! I'm glad you're enjoying yourself!

Dawn of the Next Day

[lumberlady]

[good morning, Constantin.

have another photo of a page of text with a finger pointed to the word fallacious… if only it was just sexy words she needed help with!!!

she’s been trying to rush through and guess words she doesn’t know on context to try and finish the story but it’s the villain’s speech so it seems important?!]

CONSTANTIN good morning
what is?

[takeroot]

[Oh, such progress... he's so proud. That's dedication to the horny craft.]

Good morning! That word means false. Badly informed, essentially. A fallacious person is a liar!

[lumberlady]

[look she wanted a distraction she’s taking the distraction. would she have been this sad about a character death a week ago? maybe not! but that’s okay]

but hero is not liar!
well
does tell lies many times yes
but not this type of lie…

[takeroot]

Sometimes, imaginary people in books lie about the other ones? Does this not happen in the book you lent me?

[NO deceit?? where is the realism.]