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[takeroot]

Well, somewhat? Big as in particularly impressively excited, I suppose. Firm!

I'm sure he'll make bountiful use of it in a few pages, if you take a peek.

[lumberlady]

oh this is good news
i was much worried for hero when beginning scene was old lover leaving
because of anger about stealing and sword fight
but he meet new exciting person so quick?

[takeroot]

I assure you it will be very exciting from now on! But I mustn't tell you what happens at the end of book one or it will spoil the adventure.

[the SEXY adventure]

The sword fights are excellent, don't you think? Very evocative. Ah, and our hero's charming squire is a delight... I do appreciate a comedic beat away from the sword fighting, every so often.

[lumberlady]

[a sexy adventure... please distract her, sexy adventure and difficult words]

is difficult!
i read so slow but want to find ending

SQUIRE is having good humor yes
i like how red hair comrade never understand the humor
and SQUIRE he say "is joke"
because then i know also for sure
is joke!

[takeroot]

Just think of it as savoring a fine meal, but this meal is made of words.

Yes, they are delightful friends. I hope you enjoy them even more in book two! Keep me posted, yes?

[......hmm,]

And! I am readily available for anything else you might want to talk about. Unrelated to anything.

[subtle]

[lumberlady]

[there’s a bit of a pause that wasn’t present in the other… while not fast, at least steady responses.

one in which someone considers if it’s a good idea to talk in detail about someone leaving to someone who maybe doesn’t want to leave.

but.]

like disappeared room mate?

[equally subtle]

[takeroot]

Oh, well, if you would like to, yes. Like disappeared roommate.

[gosh it's like they're on the same subtle wavelength somehow!!]

[lumberlady]

probably
THE WICKED BROTHERHOOD
is more fun conversation…
i could ask about next word
i find already

[it was a lot easier to read hard books when you could just lean over and ask the guy sitting next to you???

last chance to bail…]

[takeroot]

Well
If you really would prefer not to talk about it, I won't press you.

[that would make him a hypocrite?? completely and totally, especially after the other day.]

The offer remains open, either way, and you needn't feel obligated to be fun. What is the next word?

[lumberlady]

truthfully
i am much sad
and lonely
but
will saying so make not so?
this time unsure

so i think i will try to read
but then hero 's lover is TURGID
and now he is

[photo says......... "twitching spasmodically"]

[takeroot]

No, it won't. But it can be worse to let it fester.

[he learned this like two months ago... sage advice.]

That phrase is meant to evoke something similar to, hmm... Have you ever seen a fish out of water? Like that.

I confess not all of the prose is especially good in these books.

[lumberlady]

i will not become so surely
have too many work to do
and plant to care for

[connie the vet…]

fish outside water?
is strange to compare
but manhood does sometimes do this
is not good to say?

[beatojuice]

It certainly does, doesn't it? Being pitied means being treated as something completely helpless. It can be insulting.

Couldn't that land you in serious trouble?

[takeroot]

I don't think most of us can help it, sometimes.

[manhood does this...... sad but true.]

Do you think a fish out of water is particularly enticing? There are better images to evoke in this context, I should think.

[takeroot]

I don't disagree! I may not be much of an asset in something like a brawl, but to watch the cogs turn behind someone's eyes as they prepare to walk on eggshells around me like I am a sensitive child is a level of helpless I cannot abide. Tedious!

And I've no idea. There is a decent chance I fail completely before anyone takes notice, after all.

[lumberlady]

but plant care is most important part
is his mother
so even if he is gone i can not neglect

[wait what]

well
no
but they did not say fish direct...
now i thinking about fish...
what word is more good?
throb?

[takeroot]

A plant is his mother?

Throb would be better than anything happening "spasmodically," yes. It's much subtler.

[lumberlady]

yes
no?
sort of
mother turn into linden tree
by gods
he ask me to grow linden tree with green stone power
and he love
so i cannot be too sad
must care for tree

[it makes sense... right...]

maybe i no try hard to remember this character
is three full
so many strokes

[bc to her it says 散発的...]

[takeroot]

Caring for a tree and being sad are not mutually exclusive items. I feel I should point that out. I have cared for my plants and separately been sad plenty of times.

Just imagine it says "throb," instead.

[lumberlady]

i have confidence for both
but
just can not become so sad that cannot care for tree
is good thing, yes?

[goals... just don't get That Sad...]

throb is only one character
much more easy yes

[takeroot]

Well, it is a tree. Trees do look after themselves quite well in the forest, so I daresay you could afford to worry less about it.

Are there any other words you'd like me to help with?

[lumberlady]

is tree grown by manna and not nature
i do not know
so i give manna every day to keep healthy just in case.

but
no is fine
i think next chapter looks more easy
thank you CONSTANTIN

[takeroot]

Well, do your best, I suppose. Let me know if you'd like to talk about the books again.

1/2

[lumberlady]

i do
thank you one more time CONSTANTIN

Eve of The Next Day...

[lumberlady]

CONSTANTIN
why you no warn i
JULIUS die in such tragic way!!!